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13th March 2018:
Great story, hope you continue writing. I like your writing style and the characters. Good to see things from Snape's view as well!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy to have another review and that you enjoy the story.

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Review #2, by Katrin A PROMISE

17th February 2018:
I love the story so far! There's a brilliant dynamic
between Leonor and Snape. I can't help to feel the tension between them which is great. I read fanfiction for years and admit to never write a review, but I thought your story deserves it! I reviewed now my two favourite chapters, but I love all of them. Looking forward to more.
Katrin XXX

Author's Response: It's so encouraging to read your review! I love it! Cheers!

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Review #3, by Katrin DRAGONS AND VENOM

17th February 2018:
It's my favourite chapter! I'm hooked! I couldn't stop reading and now I'm desperately waiting for an update. Please update soon!

Thank you from Katrin!

Author's Response: Hi Katrin,
you make me so happy with your review! Thank you very much. I hope you like the new chapter! I'm so sorry to let everybody wait, but I'm in a bad personal situation and it takes my time to write away. I've got more in my head about the story, but I don't get it written as quickly as I want.
Best regards! Leonor

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Review #4, by Jeni HIDDEN PLACES

19th December 2017:
I'm totally thrilled after this chapter, can't wait to read more! I wonder what will happen to Leonor and Severus. It's really good.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #5, by :-) THE YULE BALL

1st December 2017:
Really great plot as well as characters. I hope Leonor gets her happy ending some day ... I'll continue reading the next chapter, only wanted to thank you in between for sharing the story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I really like to share the story with you and love to read the lovely reviews!

Merry Christmas to you and everybody enjoying the story!

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Review #6, by Anna SILENT DESIRE

22nd November 2017:
I'm still greatly enjoying this whole story. I'm torn between wanting them to find a way out of keeping everything a secret and growing to love each other, but I like the tension too. If Snape could just let go!
Will you be adding a new chapter soon? I'm waiting for it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Anna! I'm very sorry that I cannot update so frequently, but I'm very busy at work in the moment and there's so little time for writing. I hope to publish the next chapter before Christmas!

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Review #7, by WeasleyFan SILENT DESIRE

11th November 2017:
Great storyline! Thanks for it and please continue wirh Snape+Leonor. Hope they are going to be happy!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #8, by RedheadsKnowBest BETTING DEBTS

9th September 2017:
Hello, I would just like to tell you that I am absolutely hooked! I LOVE this story line, how you have portrayed Severus, and I love Leonor as well. My most favourite harry potter fan fiction piece yet. I must say (and I think I speak for everyone) that I am dying of anticipation to read another steamy, passionate and FULL ON love scene that we know Leonor (and the rest of us) deserve! Thank you so much for sharing this work with us.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm absolutely thrilled about your review and that you read + like it. I'm working already on the next two chapters, but I'm not fully ready yet. I hope I can manage to meet your expectations and I just like to ask everybody for a little more patience. Severus got his own agenda - 'Always' ;-)

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Review #9, by A regular reader BETTING DEBTS

28th August 2017:
I'm always happy if there's a new chapter. I forgot to write a report in the past (sorry ;-), but I do so now!
It's a great plot and things come together again and again. I like how you pick up events from earlier chapters and it develops the story and the relationship of the protagonists.
I'm already looking forward to read how the dinner will go an what Hermione's plans are.
Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hi there! I'm so happy you like it. Would be great if everybody would just send a quick message for the likes / don't likes.
Many many thanks to you!

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Review #10, by Megan D. CHRISTMAS EVE

3rd August 2017:
The part with Trewlaney and McGonagall is so great. It's really nicely written from an outside perspective and it confirms the same impression I had from the original books. I will continue reading ;-)

Author's Response: Many thanks! So great you like it, I just picked what I thought J.K. Rowling wanted to transport to the reader.

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16th July 2017:
I always like a Snape/OC story! I found in some Snape/OC stories that another Marauder girl is a bit over done to start a relationship with Snape. It didn't work with Lily, even though Snape and Lily shared some common interest with potions. I enjoyed the beginning chapters with your descriptions of the interaction between Snape/Leonor. I'm glad to read a story where the girl is not a saint nor has special abilities.
Leonor seems rather normal, like Snape, a little talented, but mostly studious, hard-working and responsible. In my opinion she's attractive to Snape, because not immediately absorbed by Gryffindor and still Leonor is not callous nor snide as the Malfoy's.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for writing a review! I'll try to make Leonor not equal to Lily or any of the Marauders, hope she gets step by step an own personality which should be in the grey area between the Hogwarts house stereotypes. Looking forward to your next review!

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Review #12, by slydog NEW YEAR

3rd July 2017:
I really like the story. Snape's still so cool. I like how he's written. Please continue.

Author's Response: I like to write Snape, but never know if it is good. Thank you; great you like it.

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Review #13, by akw A SECRET TALE

29th June 2017:
I admit that the beginning was a bit bland, but it's getting better and better!

Author's Response: Great thanks for reading! Critics is always welcome and I try to improve.

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Review #14, by moongirl TENDER BEGINNING

28th June 2017:
I saw it coming and it was still different! Snape's well written :-)

Author's Response: Great thanks! I always read couple of times before ready with Snape. He's difficult, but that's the fun, isn't it?

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Review #15, by a Snape fan SPELL PRACTICE

26th June 2017:
Excellent introduction to the story and the main person, looking forward to see it progressing ... and how Snape and Lupin get along.

Author's Response: Great thanks!!!

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Review #16, by Anna NEW YEAR

23rd June 2017:
I'm still reader of the story and wait for the next chapter, have to be patient :-(((
Love it, and the closeness to canon. It could have happened just aside. Snape's a master of disguise, except the little mishaps like in the tavern!

Author's Response: Thank you Anna!

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Review #17, by moongirl A SECRET TALE

23rd June 2017:
One more of my favourite chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #18, by moongirl HIDDEN PLACES

23rd June 2017:
I like that chapter too!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

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Review #19, by moongirl DRAGONS AND VENOM

23rd June 2017:
Well written story, the plot brings things together. I continue reading :-)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

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Review #20, by MiaB NEW YEAR

20th June 2017:
One more great chapter, looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #21, by slydog A SECRET TALE

19th June 2017:
I always like to read pieces of Snape's childhood. Rowling left us so little about it! Hope you continue to write about it.

Author's Response: Yes, I will. Promised!

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Review #22, by Kimberley TENDER BEGINNING

22nd May 2017:
Such a great update! I love Leonor and Snape, couldn't stop reading the story. It shows the lovable side of two very alone people. I just fear it won't have a happy ending, but only know after the next updates, can't wait!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading & reviewing Kimberley!
You speak my thoughts! While reading the Harry Potter books several times I always found Snape's fait/fortune unbearable. It's the life I don't like to live. Many people in the books have a difficult time, suffer from death etc., but Snape's personal situation was hopeless (to me). That's why I gave him a partner in my story, but I don't bespeak the ending yet ;-). It's only in my mind so far.

@ everybody who reads the story / reviews
I really want to thank you all for reading! It's a great honour to me if you go through with it to the last chapter. Thanks so much!
I'll also appreciate your critique, because it's my first attempt to write and English isn't my native language. Your opinion is very welcome!

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23rd March 2017:
It's me again! Chapter 11 is my favourite together with 10 & 13 ... and now I have to wait, uhhh!
Snape and wandless magic :-) "his hands motioned over her body", so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! It's also one of my favourite scenes.

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Review #24, by Anna HIDDEN PLACES

22nd March 2017:
Hi again! I really like it and wait for every new update. Like to see more of Snape/Scott ... Snape in business shirt must be hot :-))) XXX

Author's Response: Yeah, I also liked to write that ;-) I'm happy if you like it too.

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Review #25, by Anna VISIT TO HOGSMEADE

12th February 2017:
Please update, like tp know how the story continues!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll update soon!

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