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Reading Reviews for Off Beat
  
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by putitonpaper The Assignment

18th January 2017:
I'm very excited to see where you take this! Based on your description and the nature of Clara's job, I can sense there's going to be some trouble/hilarity with the Clara-Ginny Potter-James Potter dynamic. And I'm sensing this opinion of James will come back in an interesting way :) --> Just played for England at the Cup - and terribly, might I add.

Very excited to see how you picture James. Also pumped to see how Clara interacts with all these players at her job. I have a feeling she's quite the bad*ss.

Looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was such a thoughtful review and I loved loved loved reading it.

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Review #2, by Hdenizzz The Assignment

18th January 2017:
I really liked the topic. Cant wait to read the next chapter. When can you update?

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully within a week, I just went back to school though so things are getting busy unfortunately.

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Review #3, by crimson quill The Assignment

18th January 2017:
Hello!

your first story, exciting! I'm new too! I have to say that I love the start to this story! it sounds really interesting. I really like the flow of how you introduced all the main character/themes of the story in a very natural way through the character's speech/dialogue.

good job! look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much!!

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Review #4, by Nee The Assignment

17th January 2017:
You write really I can't wait to read more of it!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

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Review #5, by blackballet The Assignment

16th January 2017:
Wow I can't believe this is your first story! It's so impressive! I love your dialogue. It's incredibly fluid, and the characterization of Ginny is just insane. I am really engaged by this story, and know that it will be one of the greats.

Can't wait to read more!

blackballet

Author's Response: Oh my gosh that is beyond sweet. Thank you so much!!

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Review #6, by Anon The Assignment

16th January 2017:
Wow! I'm already hooked! This looks very interesting and I can't wait to see where you'll take it.. Looking forward for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Aw thank you! Hopefully I'll have it up within a week.

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Review #7, by Nameless The Assignment

16th January 2017:
Good job for a first time!

seems interesting and looking forward to reading futher.

~M~

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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