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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Serpendor Year One-Chapter Three

1st January 2017:
"You have to understand people to domesticate them." haha Cassiopeia sure is something!

Poor Virgo! It can't be easy to be a Malfoy squib. What ever happened to the muggle from the last chapter though?

Nice chapter! :)

Author's Response: I actually don't know what happened to the muggle. I think she just got obliviated. Perhaps she will come up later.

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Review #2, by Serpendor Crouch-Claw Chronicles: Book One, Chapter Two

3rd December 2016:
This is interesting! I've always wondered what would happen if a muggle found their way in. I do have one bit of advise though... you should probably change your story title to:"Crouch-Claw Chronicles: Book One" since you are posting multiple chapters because as it is right now it says I am at: "Crouch -Claw Chronicles:Book One, Chapter One by Ravenclaw Writer Chapter 2 : Crouch-Claw Chronicles: Book One, Chapter Two". Otherwise it's great so far! You and the other author are doing well :)

Author's Response: I think that I fixed it. Thanks for the feedback!

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Review #3, by Serpendor Year One-Chapter One

25th November 2016:
Nice start! Excited to read more... keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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