Reading Reviews for Marlene
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Review #1, by victoria_anne Love

27th October 2016:
HPFT Team Vampire Review

Hey there!

This jumped out at me straight away. I love stories about Marlene, and for this to be a collection of short stories about her is right up my street. To have her in love with Lily is something I appreciate even more.

If the point of this first chapter was to hook readers, consider its job done. It's a wonderful opening that makes me want to know more!

Beautiful job!

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