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Review #1, by ExplosiveBlunderbuss Sirius and Edora

28th October 2016:
I really like this idea, it's interesting to see Sirius going back to somebody after he escaped Azkaban. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much.

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Review #2, by victoria_anne Sirius and Edora

27th October 2016:
HPFT Team Vampire Review

Hey there!

Ah, Sirius and his childhood sweetheart... I love these stories.

Personally I always think it can be risky to have an OC in a one-shot. Is it enough time for us to get to know them? But you've done a wonderful job. I liked Edora from the moment I read her name.

It's always so sad to read about the things Sirius missed out on while he was in Azkaban, and I think you've done a great job in writing Sirius' mixed emotions at seeing his old flame again.

The flashback was bittersweet. It was wonderful to see them together as teenagers, but to know that's what they missed out on is really devastating. So now I'm a blubbering mess, thanks! ;)

But seriously, you've done a really amazing job with this ♥

Author's Response: Oh my, thank you thank you!

I met a girl named Edora a couple years ago at a conference and I've been DYING to steal her name because it just seems /so/ Hogwarts-esque.

The flashback wasn't in my first couple of drafts, but I just felt like the after would hurt more if there was a bit of before.

Thank you SO much for the review

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