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Reading Reviews for After Deathly Hallows
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Wrennie I:AVADA KEDAVRA !

13th October 2016:
Keep writing...you can't stop on thAt note.

Author's Response: Thanks,and sorry for the mistake in the previous review.I didn't want to say "to do learn"...:\I wanted to write only " to learn".Sorry.

Sly.Puk


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Review #2, by Cammon  I:AVADA KEDAVRA !

11th October 2016:
This is a really interesting story idea. And for English not being your first language, it was pretty good. I am excited to see where it goes.
:)

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you wrote a review at my chapther.There will be another one soon with an interesting plot,I promise.I am sorry for writing so slowly,but this year at school I have a very important exam for entering in an high school,so,in my free time I have to do learn and I don't have so much time to write.

Sly.Puk


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Review #3, by FriendofMolly I:AVADA KEDAVRA !

29th September 2016:
Slytherin Pukwudgie,
Except for the end, this was a concise beginning to what can be a wonderful tale. I enjoyed (if at this point that can be said), you included all the important characters. So I applaud you. Now for the part you may or may not like. I found you didn't space between the end of one sentence and the beginning of the next. Yes you had a period, but there wasn't the usual separation. You also had a few misspelled words and capitalization was also missing. You might want to look for a Beta reader to look over your next chapter before you post. Your story has great potential, with a few tweaks you just might find a smoother flow. I look forward to your next.
FoM
PS I can't wait to find just which Death Eater snuck into the Great Hall.

Author's Response: I thank you for the review and i am sorry for the mistakes.I will correct them.This isn't my first language and i was a little bit in a hurry when i posted it,but,no problem,the mistakes will disapear.

Slytherin Pukwudgie


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Review #4, by GRYFFINKNIGHT17 I:AVADA KEDAVRA !

29th September 2016:
Nice cliffie at the end! Alittle disappointed no Harry - Ginny action yet! You need to slowdown and proofread.alot! :D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks for writing a review.I promise that the story will be more intersting in the following chapters.I am very happy that you read this chapter!!!I really thank you!

Sly.Puk.


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