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Reading Reviews for Criss Cross
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by threelittlestars c r o s s e d .

11th September 2017:
Wow. This was beautiful and breath-taking. I think you really captured James & Lily! Thank you for sharing this story :)

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Review #2, by Lexish c r o s s e d .

16th June 2017:
Wow I really liked this! I've never read something in 2nd person that was done so well! And you were so consistent with it too. Great job!

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Review #3, by Fugacity c r o s s e d .

17th March 2017:
Very economical with words yet it effectively captures the love James had for Lilly - and the last part is thus quite heartbreaking.

Kudos for a job well done.

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Review #4, by quill2parchment c r o s s e d .

1st January 2017:
Gosh this was brilliant. Wonderfully done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot :)

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Review #5, by twitchy_pigeons c r o s s e d .

25th December 2016:
One word: perfection.

Author's Response: Asdfghjkl thank you!!

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Review #6, by Zaphira c r o s s e d .

14th November 2016:
Very well written, short and sweet, I really enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad! & thanks for the sweet feedback!

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Review #7, by JKButcher c r o s s e d .

7th September 2016:
*low whistle*

Umm... yeah. So that's the fastest I've ever favorited an author. This thing is a taut lyrical marvel. And in second person to boot. I'm honestly having difficulty finding appropriate things to write in this review without it turning into little more than an effusive string of curse words (but in the very best of ways, I assure you).

I normally would provide a bit of constructive criticism here, but after reading this for the third time, I haven't come up with a single valid critique. You know what you are doing. You do it exceptionally well. For the love of all that burns brightly in this world, keep doing it.

And I'll keep reading.

Author's Response: This might be the best feedback I've ever gotten on anything. Thank you, thank you, thank you for your kind words - I can't even tell you how much it means to me.

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