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Reading Reviews for Making Friends
  
1 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Anonymous Muggle Introduction

2nd August 2016:
I like this. The characters are very clear in both physical descriptions and personalities.

The first-person voice is cute, and the asides (in parentheses) are also a colourful touch.

A few minor typo's but nevermind that. Great start!

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback!

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