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Review #1, by Violet Potter 434 Who do you see?

11th July 2016:
looks good so far

i'm slightly confused about the narrative, but i'm sure i'll figure it out with the next chapter, so please can you get that up quickly ;)

from me

Author's Response: Hi @violet potter 434
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
I hope to update every Sunday and I hope the next chapter will be a bit clearer.

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