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Review #1, by The Birthday Goblin Chapter One

13th August 2016:

The Birthday Goblin is back with another review to you! I hope you're getting spoiledy woiledy wherever you are!

But this! Why does it stop! I HAVE QUESTIONS! This is such an exciting start to a story! Who is the Magical Liberty Brigade? What happened to Ebby? How do the Blackwoods come into it? Is Draco a Healer or what? I usually only come out on birthdays, but I'm definitely making an exception when the next chapter is up! I think you also did a really good job in building suspense through Rose's thoughts and emotions.

Game time! OH MAN I LOVE GAMES! Here's another riddle for you!

Judge no book by its cover, it is said amongst the wiseMy unappealing outside my true useflnessbelies
The swiftest means to reach thy goal lies wel-concealed in me
Extend thy hand then, pilgrim, and embrace thy destiny.
What am I?

Until next time, Paula!

The Birthday Goblin

Author's Response: Hello my favorite goblin!

So many questions! Draco is a healer! (That's the only question I can answer).

This is the one that I was stuck on. My first thought was regarding the Hallows because reaching thy goals and embrace destiny. I was watching GoF yesterday though and I'm starting to think maybe that manky old boot that was a portkey in it? It was unappealing and the word "swiftest" and "extend they hand" when Arthur made Harry grab on last minute. I'm not sure but it's either the Hallows or the portkey.

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Review #2, by Sasha Chapter One

6th August 2016:

Great story, I really like it so far! Are Ebby and Rose best friends or __fill in the blank_?

Please keep updating!!


Author's Response: Hi!

It's meant to be a little bit ambiguous! ;) I'd lean toward fill in the blank though!

Thank you so much and I'll be updating this story shortly!

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