Reading Reviews for You're Worse Than Crucio
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Review #1, by HarryGinnyLove88 Epilogue

8th November 2017:
A lot different story then a Rowling own...
Very much love it ☺

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #2, by P Epilogue

26th May 2017:
I enjoyed reading this very much! Thank you for writing it and posting it here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

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Review #3, by Zaphira Epilogue

16th March 2017:
Loved it! Very well written. Interesting twists on the story.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :)

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Review #4, by P Epilogue

7th February 2017:
Lovedd it :D you write really well.

Author's Response: thanks so much!!

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Review #5, by water_lilies Epilogue

3rd February 2017:
This is such a great story!

I thought it had been abandoned, since you didn't update for a few months when I was checking daily for updates, but I am sooo happy you finished it!!! It was a great surprise to look it up yesterday to find it complete!!! I was so happy that I made a point to read the entire story today from Chapter 1 :D

I love how well you mixed the Harry Potter with Pride and Prejudice universes, they are both two of my absolute favorite books and you did them justice; you wove the characters, places, and personalities from both into the P&P plot in an amazing way. The changes that you made (such as Peter and Voldemort) fir very well with the story too. I loved the direct quotes and references to Pride and Prejudice and the fact that James and Lily's relationship, as well as their personalities, retained a lot of the characteristics that we know from the Harry Potter books.

The pace of the story and the character development was great and it really made the story enjoyable. There were some spelling errors (such as whether for weather in one chapter) and some changes from the third to either second of first person, specifically when it came to Marlene, but I forgot to point them out in the corresponding chapters... sorry about that! Nevertheless, they did not take away from the great story you created.

This is truly one of my favorite James/Lily stories and my favorite AU :D

Loved the story, please keep writing!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so, so much for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful review.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it -- p&p and hp are two of my favorite universes as well, and I'm glad that I didn't butcher them too terribly when trying to combine them!

I am chronically guilty of popping in and out of this site sporadically, so I do apologize for that! I'm glad that you guys were willing to bear with me and to stick through with it until the end. It truly means a lot. :'D

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Review #6, by GinnyPotterForever Epilogue

3rd February 2017:
Wow! Loved the whole thing! So beautifully written! Even though it's AU, the essence of the characters remained the same and that's what was most attractive about this. I wish we got to know the Sirius-Marlene back story though, because I'm a sucker for Sirius finding true love. Anyhoo, thanks for this brilliant story!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! The Sirius-Marlene backstory is an ever-growing plot bunny in my head, so we'll see if it ever ends up being word vomited onto a screen. :D

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Review #7, by GinnyPotterForever Witch Weekly's Most Charming Scowl Award

2nd February 2017:
It's been a long time since I've read a good new Jily! I'm always on the prowl and I've finally stumbled upon this gem of a thing.

Love this whole idea. Can't wait to meet Sirius. Haven't actually read Pride and Prejudice (sue me) but thoroughly enjoying this!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Hopefully it still resonates even without the p&p connection!

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Review #8, by Malnonne Epilogue

24th January 2017:
Happy and sad tears. Perfect ending

Author's Response: thanks a bunch! :)

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Review #9, by Nameless Epilogue

23rd January 2017:
wow, i really enjoyed this!! thank you so much :)

would ahve loved to petrova again - something about her makes me want to stab my computer - but i guess we cant all be like lily and get everything in life.

would love to see more writings from you (besides the ones i read :))


Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you! petrova was honestly a lot of fun to write. i don't know if you read anton chekhov, but i'm playing a character in one of his plays right now and i'm totally channelling petrova while doing so. XD (natasha from the three sisters, if you're interested)

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Review #10, by Toni Epilogue

23rd January 2017:
Thank you for ending your brilliant story happily. I have loved this so much and really glad to finally be able to read fully from beginning to end.
Thank you for writing this and sharing your story with us .

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your wonderful reviews. They truly mean a lot

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Review #11, by Nameless Little Red Lies

14th January 2017:
Wow, did not see that one coming at all! Out of all the scanirios I thought those (with petrova, and lily taking the plunge) were not at all among them! But great job as always :)

Id love to see Petrova try and sabatoge the wedding and get her just desserts... so we may need more than just the epilogue... ;);)


Author's Response: Haha, thank you! Poor Petrova is two characters lumped into one, so she gets the worst combination of Caroline and Lady Catherine de Bourgh. No wonder she's so surly all the time. :') Anyway, I wanted to parallel that part of p&p and have our 'Lady Catherine' kind of kick-start Lily and James's relationship without realizing!

Ah, it'd be such a Petrova thing to try to throw a fit at the wedding. Hmm... ;)

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Review #12, by Malnonne Little Red Lies

14th January 2017:
I mean you can keep writing more than the epilogue. It doesn't have to end.

Author's Response: Bwahaha. I may or may not already have plot bunnies for a Sirius/Marlene Auror training spin-off (ft. Jily cameos of course), but I have no idea if that will ever see the light of day. xD

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Review #13, by Toni Little Red Lies

14th January 2017:
Yes! Now I am just hoping for a P&P ending not a Harry Potter beginning.

Author's Response: Ahhh thank goodness for AUs! Anything is possible. ;)

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Review #14, by malnonne Halcyon Days

13th January 2017:
Looking for all the James and Lily next chapter! Enjoy Europe

Author's Response: Woot, thank you! Hopefully it won't disappoint. :)

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Review #15, by Kristina1990 Halcyon Days

13th January 2017:
Gah, too much angst!!! ;)

Author's Response: But we know what unresolved angst usually leads up to ;)))

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Review #16, by Nameless Halcyon Days

13th January 2017:
Hey there,

I am so happy for Remus and Dorcas - sweet and to the point she got, wow!

Marlene - who woulda thunk? not me, that is for sure!

ANd poor bitter lil Lily - but I guess James will make it up to her somehow! Will Lily act like LIzzie and not trifle with the man she loves, or will she act like "all females do" as Mr. Collins so aptly put it and pretend she does not want to marry him? (Honestly I can see Lily doing that but because she is so angry that he did not respond to her letter!!)

Enjoy Europe! (and update ;P)


Author's Response: As much as I love P&P, it did need a slight modern update -- I wanted to make the other female characters just as strong-willed and independent as Lizzie which is why Dorcas and Marlene both got their spotlight this chapter.

As for Lily: hopefully she thinks she's made poor James suffer enough, but we'll see what she does! As always, I enjoyed reading your review. ^___^

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Review #17, by Malnonne Some Things Reparo Can't Fix

8th January 2017:
Huzzah!!! It keeps getting better and better. I'll be sad when it is over but am so excited for what comes next!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you!! We're in for a wild ride for the next few chapters. c:

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Review #18, by Nameless Some Things Reparo Can't Fix

7th January 2017:
wow - this was a little different than the previous chapters. but i liked it. Marlene's thoughts were really telling, and I am glad that we know how she thinks now.

As always, great job and can't wait for more. I am a little sad that it is almost over, because I love this story and I really like your writing co i hope you will do some more stories.


Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a fan of utilizing multiple POV's so I'm glad sharing insight on Marlene's thoughts was something that you enjoyed.

And aw, I'm really honored to hear that. Totally made me day. c:

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Review #19, by Toni Some Things Reparo Can't Fix

7th January 2017:
Another good chapter. I get so excited when I see there is an update. However I have found a very small mistake, in the 7th paragraph you have spelt She'd as Sshe'd and as you don't make mistakes it sticks out. Other than that I am looking forward to the next chapter and then read it all again from the beginning. Love this story.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you for pointing that out! I must have missed that while editing. Going to fix that now. :) And as always, thank you for your review! ^___^

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Review #20, by malnonne Petrichor

4th January 2017:
ack! the plot thickens.
Like I know what happens in P&P but I am still on the edge of my seat. I adore them, this story and you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! c: Fluff has lulled us into a false sense of security; this next one is definitely more action-packed.

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Review #21, by Nameless Petrichor

3rd January 2017:
Thank you Thank you Thank you!

I love these quick fast updates :)

I was wondering when Snape, Marlene, and the rest would show up - not that I don't love the Lily/James time but I want to know about everyone else too.

Love the line where James says to himself, "I wonder if girls know when blokes are talking through their stomachs." It's awesome.

Keep it up!


Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much for the review! Yup, we had to pop that James/Lily bubble sometime. They were being decidedly undramatic and we can't have that. ;D

As usual, I look forward to reading your reviews. ^___^

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Review #22, by Malnonne An Interlude

1st January 2017:
Fabulous Fluff! I adore your James and Lily and am patiently awaiting them both getting their heads on straight. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! C: And ha, aren't we all? Where's that 'now kiss' meme when we need it? :')

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Review #23, by Lea Foreign Waters

31st December 2016:
I'm so happy you updated! I was afraid you had abandoned the story, but I'm glad to see this is not the case. My semester too has been heavy, so I completely understand you weren't able to update sooner! But what a great chapter again! It read very smoothly and also funny which made it a very pleasent and light read. You were able to create the same feelings and atmosphere as Jane Austen's P&P. I can't wait 'till the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hehe, this story is my little plot baby so it won't be abandoned, for better or for worse. :') Ah, it feels so good to hear that it recreated the P&P atmosphere for you! I'm super flattered. c:

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Review #24, by Toni Foreign Waters

31st December 2016:
Thank you for another brilliant chapter. I do love your story and have been looking out for an update. Having read P&P I love how you have twisted it to fit Lily & James'. Looking forward to your next instalment.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! c: I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying the story. ^___^

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Review #25, by Midnight_Witch Foreign Waters

30th December 2016:
Hello from the other side of the holidays and being lazy and eating all the foods (: The chapter was so lovely and just felt so warm as you're reading it. I loved how cheeky the Potters were and how lovely they seemed. Just so warm and inviting! Plus the whole James and Lily getting their heads out of their bums and at least agreeing t be friends is so great! I can hardly wait for the next chapters (especially after catching a glimpse of those CIs you posted)!!

Author's Response: Ahhh hello!! :) This other side of the holidays is very satisfying, heh. The next chapter is even more warm and fuzzy (hopefully) before the drama kicks in. >:) /cackles

As always, thank you for dropping by and leaving a review. c:

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