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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DEAL WITH IT Harry

31st March 2017:
Nice. :) Anyway, GO TEAM POTTER!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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Review #2, by MargaretLane Harry

1st May 2016:
Yikes, those last lines was somewhat surprising. It was obvious something odd had happened, but I didn't expect that Harry and Hermione would be talking after they had died.

I'm also somewhat intrigued by the jump in Harry's memories. Most seem to be about the war - presumably decades ago at this point - but it then moves to his granddaughter.

It sounds as if there may have been further wars since the one of which we know.

Author's Response: Hi!

Yay, it's a review on my new story! I wasn't able to get the last three scenes up before the deadline, but I'm still working on them very hard. I hope they'll be up by June, but I can't hold my breath. May is a busy month for me.

Yeah, it is strange having a conversation when you're no longer "there" any longer. I hope I didn't write this scene as too confusing. The story sort of evolved beyond what I could handle given my time constraints. Ah, Muse, how you do me wrong!

There might have been a lot of things going on after the Epilogue. This was meant to hint at a greater history without really explaining much before the next chapter. I don't know if that was such a great choice, but there it is.


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