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Reading Reviews for Soul Enemies
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Val Drunken Shenanigans

26th April 2016:
Hi! So per your AN, I am reviewing. First time on this website, actually ;) (reviewing, that is). Since I am not a native speaker when it comes to English, you won't hear me going on about grammar because I usually notice only plain atrocities :D
As for the story: please, do keep it as it is. I mean, itīs fluffy and romantic just enough. I like Marlene, she is not overly "super" (some OCs are just over the top IMO), so that makes her a likeable character. Sirius is well portrayed, too. I am impatient to see how this story will go on :) I believe you wrote a decent piece of fanfic. It is not over the top, which makes it better- more believable- and the Marauders donīt seem out of character :) As far as fantic goes, I am giving you a 10, since I had a really great time reading your story, your language is not overly simple or too on the purple-prosey side (is that even a word? :D), and I will continue reading.
So, keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Val, for choosing my story to review first! I'm flattered :) I'm also very glad that you like the main characters and feel that they're well portrayed :D Excited that you're going to continue reading!

Sad warning, though. It'll be a week or so before I can update again. I've got finals this week, but afterward, I'm planning to post tons for you!


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Review #2, by Ellie Drunken Shenanigans

25th April 2016:
I really like this story! The way you capture Marlene's survivor's guilt in this last chapter gets me. So true how you are supposed to miss people who are gone all the time and you can't imagine how life could be anything other than sad - until it isnt. How she knew she had to grieve and get over it but now she has (for one minute) and suddenly feels like she's committed a betrayal! So real and unfair, poor thing. Wonder where she will go in her drunk state. Hope someone (*cough* Sirius *cough*) sobers up and finds her and makes it a little easier to get through. Love the way you write the dynamic between those two !

Author's Response: Thank you, Ellie! :) I was worried that I had done poorly with the grief aspects of it all, so that means so much to me! As for Sirius... we'll see what happens ;)

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Review #3, by ambermm The Elphaba Prank

12th April 2016:
Brilliant first chapter. I love the interactions between Marlene and Sirius (I'm a massive Blackinnon fan)!!

Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad they felt good -- I was worried that they weren't exactly right! Glad that I did my favorite paring justice!

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