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Reading Reviews for The Toxic Princess
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Snakeskin Surprise!

6th March 2017:
This my favourite fan fic yet. I normally like them to not contradict the original books and i dont think this does. Please write more chapter (50 at least), xbox is boring.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll let you in on a little secret; I've written like 20 chapters and I'm still not done yet and I AM UNSTOPPABLE. I also love the books so much so I like to try and follow the basic narrative when I write, but I always loved fics that show it from a perspective outside of Harry's. I mean, Hogwarts had to have been so much more interesting behind closed doors, right? ;)

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Review #2, by HannahG Surprise!

21st February 2017:
I love how you create believable dialogue with your characters. Fred and George crack me up. I am really enjoying this story. Awesome job!

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Wow, thank you so much! I noticed that sometimes I go heavy on dialogue so I like to make it as natural and believable as possible. Reviews like this actually warm my heart and make me feel so good and I just love thinking about these when I write because it gives me the push to just keep going \(n-n)/

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Review #3, by dumbledore_wannabe Lessons Begin

19th January 2017:
Glad you are still working on this story! I'm interested to see how Leda will find the magical world and how it will find her.

Just wanted to mention that Hufflepuff is not usually the house which the Hat considers for those who it considers to posses particular brilliance and intelligence. That would be Ravenclaw... But I say this as a proud Hufflepuff who does possess some degree of intelligence. :)

Author's Response: Awesome! I'm super happy you're enjoying it so far! :D

And thank you for pointing that one out for me. I usually go back and reread my chapters and try to make it as accurate as possible with the HP Wikia before I post but I guess this one slipped through! I plan to do a large scale edit when the story is done so I really appreciate people like you who help catch my errors and make my work a little easier!

- Seltas -

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Review #4, by Potterhead1994 Unwelcome Guest

22nd June 2016:
Hey there! I think your writing is awesome and I absolutely love the story so far. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm trying to power through chapters so I can get to the good stuff because the first few chapters I write always seem super filler-y to me (T-T)

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