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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by TidalDragon Shrivelled like a Wilted Flower

12th April 2016:
Howdy Emm! As fate would have it you found yourself in the final pairing and so it is that I have taken some time to FINALly reach your story.

I thought this was a very well done piece on the phases of Lily and Petunia's relationship and, taken from Petunia's perspective, it was quite interesting to see how much force of will it takes for her to maintain such cruelty toward her sister. It's a unique take, advancing the idea that unlike the way she comes across in canon, she doesn't TRULY harden so quickly. I quite like it.

So which were my favorite segments? I think one has to be the picture at the beginning. Maybe that's too easy, relying on the idea that "a picture tells a thousand words" but I think it's very true in this situation and sets up beautifully this dramatic change in the sisterly relationship that will play out for the remainder of the story. I also thoroughly enjoyed the final two lines. You captured both the concept that "the opposite of love isn't hate, but indifferent" and at the same time fused it with one of the things that broke their Petunia's love for Lily in the first place - those dead flowers she didn't have the magic to resurrect.

Well done! Thanks for participating!

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Review #2, by May Shrivelled like a Wilted Flower

2nd April 2016:
Great read enjoyed it a lot

Author's Response: Hello May!

Thanks a lot for the review! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! :D

xoxo
Emm/Musing


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