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Review #1, by Marshal New friends

30th March 2016:
Iím Marshal (obviously)I decided to stop by your story because I havenít seen you around on the forums. Presently there are two competitions going on for the house of Slytherin (of which I am a member). We have a review a thon going competition against the other houses to see who can review the most and spread awareness of donation month here at HPFF. The site is asking for donations so that it can stay alive. So if you can spare a bit to help keep here alive that is awesome if not, we understand. Just so you know that for every $5 from a new donator another dollar will be donated by another individual. The other competition going on in Slytherin has been going all month long. We are competing amongst ourselves and working to spread the house love. With that said, onto the actual review!

You have a nice start here. It will be interesting to see where you are going to take the story. Like are you going to make these for like the Next Gen Marauders or so you have something else in mind. Is this going to be a slice of life? Are you going to follow the characters from 1st year all the way through seventh? I know lots of questions but I'm curious.

You've done a nice job introducing an original character. She doesn't feel forced at all and she fits in nicely. I am also intrigued that you placed Scorpius in Gryffindor. It will be interesting to see his parent's reaction to this and his choice in friends, let along the reaction of Ron as well. I would include Harry but I think he'll be the most chill of the lot when this news comes home.

Anyway, keep up the writing and welcome to HPFF if you are new to these parts!

- Marshal
Team Ouroboros
ďThe end is only the beginningĒ

Author's Response: Thank you or you review! I guess you'll just have to keep reading to find the answers to all of your questions ;).

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