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Reading Reviews for Through friendship and treason
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Gabby Auction at Malfoy Manor

18th March 2016:
Very captivating! I hope you continue the story!

I like how you jumped right into the storyline, but I think you need to get a bit more detailed with hermione's thoughts... maybe draco's story too (i know you probably have that all planned out and im just annoying you). It is well written, I just like a story with insane detail!

Anywho, well done!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll keep that into mind. I tend to leave out details when I write and go straight to the facts. I guess a little bit more fluff would be a good idea. :)

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Review #2, by DaFossil Introduction

12th March 2016:
A very interesting start, looking forward to seeing where this leads.

Author's Response: Thanks! I already have the first few chapters written, so I'll update them quickly. :)

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