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Reading Reviews for Katrin and Anne
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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 Chapter 1

26th March 2016:
Hi there! I'm Tasha from over on the Forums and I noticed that this is your first review and your first story posted on the archives. I wanted to invite you to check out the forums and join them if you desire. You can join a house, play games, request a beta if needed, enter writing challenges, and make amazing new friends.

As I'm sure you've seen, the site is hosting its annual fundraiser. The site is run by some amazing staffers and many spend money out of their own pockets to keep the site going. Especially Jay, the site owner. I would also like to encourage you to donate. even if it's just a couple pounds every little bit helps to help keep the site running.

With that being said, and the promotional begging out of the way :)

I think this is a great start. I like how you chose McGonogall's mom for a character. It's definitely not something I've read before. I usually stick with Dramione but now you have me curious to see where you decide to take this fic. Great start to what looks to be an amazing story!

I'm not sure how long you intend for this story to be, but I strongly reccommend making the chapters longer. This prevents having a story that's 100+ chapters long. I know sometimes longer stories discourage me from reading them since real life gets hectic sometimes and I don't always have time to come back to a fic for a while. With longer chapters, your readers can get more of the story in less time.

Again great job! I look foward to seeing you on the forums soon.

Peace, Love, and Tacos
Fundraiser Reviewing Event March 2016

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll think about all that.

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