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Reading Reviews for Agape
  
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Review #1, by Marshal filos-(friends)

5th March 2016:
For the HPFF Review-A-Thon

Hello, I'm Marshal (obviously) I came here from the forums where we are hosting a review-a-thon as you can see from above. Each review done in this review-a-thon earns money to be donated to HPFF to help keep it running. In addition to the review-a-thon. My house (Slyhterin) is having an in house reviewing competition as we going around spreading some snake love.

Anyway, your story caught my attention simply with the title. Agape love is one of the best forms of love, it is so deep and rich and I can see this with Pippa toward Dommy.

Over all you had my interest. I've studied special needs in school and part of the time in reading your story I was trying to determine if Dommy has a particular condition, not that she needs one but it isn't easy carrying the self doubt that she has. It makes for an interesting character. I also find it interesting how you have Dommy and Teddy together instead of Victoire and Teddy together.

With this story are you planning are showing a large range of agape love and how even it can take different forms or is this going to be a continued story told with the reader as Pippa? Either way had potential and I have to commend you with the use of second person it is not an easy voice to write and you handled it very well.

Anyway, keep with the great writing!


- Marshal
Team Ouroboros
"The end is only the beginning"

Author's Response: Thank you so much Marshal! I'm glad that Pippa's love for Dominique is shown. Also, I didn't have any particular conditions for Dominique in mind, mostly just general insecurities that a lot of people have, a more exaggerated. I'm actually planning on showing a range of agape love, so we'll see where that takes the story. And thank you again, second person is difficult to write, so I'm glad you think I handled it well.

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