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Review #1, by Gail Welin The Sorting of Percy Weasley

27th March 2016:
Hi SlytherinDarling!

I'm here from the forums where the Annual Fundraiser invites us all to read and review stories! Representing the wonderful House of Slytherin for the Inter-House Review Competition ♥

I really like the theme you chose here - I've often wondered why Percy landed in Gryffindor and not in Slytherin where his ambition would've been better understood. Family is indeed, a strong value that a Weasley should never forget and I love that you chose this particular reason because Percy so often struggled to be part of his own family!

I'm amazed that you took the time to write an entire Hat song, it must have been arduous! I must admit, though, that the Hat was a bit pushier than what my head canon expected :D

If you don't mind a bit of CC (constructive criticism) regarding your narration here "Bill (5th Year) and Charlie (3rd Year)" - using parentheses is a bit clumsy considering this is Percy's POV and prose narrative.

Do consider creating an account for the forums of HPFF where you can join a House of your choosing (Slytherin ♥ ), participate in all kinds of fun events (House Cups, Quidditch, Fundraisers, Review-a-thons... It's crazy over there! :p ), promote your story and even ask for feedback in the form of reviews and/or beta-reading. The forums are beyond great!

I really love the way you've depicted Percy Weasley. Basically, he's the only reasonable Weasley xD This was a cute read!



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