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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 Nightmares and Revelations

16th March 2016:
Tasha here with another review for Operation Green With Envy. I'll try to keep this short and sweet. And with less off topic stuff. :)

I thought this was another great chapter and gave more insight into what the Trio is going through with the aftermath of the war.

I especially loved the conversation between Harry & Hermione and how you had them admit their true feelings for their chosen Weasleys. I think its great too how you had Harry open up to both Ron and Hermione over what really happened in the forest. I'm looking foward to seeing how the Weasleys react when they finally hear the truth about what the Trio was doing for the last year.

Great job! I can't wait for your next update.

Operation Green With Envy 2016
Team Sassy Six
R E N C L M

Author's Response: Hi again Tasha. Thanks for the review! The Harry and Hermione conversation is one I played in my head over and over again. I really want their friendship to continue to develop and I hope to continue this theme across the story.
I was a bit worried the conversation about the forest was a bit too long but I'm glad you enjoyed it.


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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 Dawn of a new day

16th March 2016:
Hi, I'm Tasha and before I get started with my review I want to welcome you to the archives and encourage you to join the forums if you haven't already. I'm a member on both sites and have found this community to be like a second family and it's great getting to connect with others around the world that love Harry Potter as much as I do. You can join the house of your choice (although I highly recommend Slytherin) and participate in house related activities such as quidditch matches and the annual House Cup competition that happens every summer. (or winter depending on what part of the world you are in. You can also get help with your story and even find a beta if you need it.

This month Slytherin is hosting an in-house reviewing competition called Operation Green With Envy where the members that signed up are assigned teams and we come here to the archives to leave reviews and encourage members to join the forums and Slytherin house. So I guess I had better get to the reviewing before I forget what I came here for. :)

I think this is an excellent start to the story and you do a great job of capturing Harry's emotions after the battle is over. I believe it when you write how your characters are feeling after the deaths of their friends and family.

I also like the fact that you introduced a new villain (or an old one perhaps?) early on as it gives you the rest of the story to provide more of a backstory and motivation for the character.

I did notice a few possible typos and some issues with word choice but those can be cleared up by requesting a beta reader over on the forums. There are some really awesome people over there that would be more than willing to help you out if you ask.

Again I thought this was a great start and I will have to make sure to follow this story to see where you decide to take your characters.

Great Job!

Operation Green With Envy 2016
Team Sassy Six
R E N C L M

Tasha

Author's Response: Hi Tasha, sorry to get back to you so late. Thanks so much for your kind words, capturing grief isn't an easy thing to write about so I'm glad Harry's feelings are coming across.
I will definitely have a look at the forums and try to get more involved. Thanks for the advice!!


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Review #3, by Aurorofthelight Dawn of a new day

26th February 2016:
Great start on your story! I really like the premise on this and I'm curious as to who the woman is! Looking forward to seeing where you take this! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story. She is an intriguing character and I'm sure she will surprise myself as I continue writing!!

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