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Review #1, by ABlack The Sorting Ceremony

1st March 2016:
Hi there!

Iíd like to welcome you to HPFF. It looks like this is your first story on the archives! Congratulation in taking that first step. And what a start! Immediately I was impressed with the polish on your story. Your descriptions were great - not so much as to be heavy-handed yet enough to add richness of detail. Sentence flow, even the selection of main characterís name was well handled.

I love how you noted Aurelia had a tutor. So many tales ignore the question of education prior to Hogwarts. Her independent streak and coupled with being Sorted into Gryffindor will undoubtably make things interesting as this story continues. And good work ending the chapter right where you did. It was the perfect spot because it leave me wanting to read more.

Anyways, if youíd ever like to connect with other people who enjoy writing for the archives, I suggest you head over to our forums. We discuss writing, help each other, and even play games. My name there is Alexis Black and Iím a proud member of Slytherin. Currently some of us are participating in Operation Green with Envy, a competition in which we spread forum love. I do hope you consider joining the forums.

- ABlack/Alexis Black
Operation Green with Envy
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