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Reading Reviews for Breaking Inside
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Review #1, by Secret Cupid Chapter 1

15th February 2016:
Hey Lia!!

I am still around for spreading some more love! AU?! You know, it was a month or so before when I read a great HP AU and since then, I have been fishing out for more and more of them. And yay! I got a new one here!

This story is off to a great start! I am really excited to know more about this Australian school. I really liked the name 'Hogsmeade High!' It has a nice ring to it! ;)

The introductions of the main characters went on smoothly. Everything could be easily deduced by the way you wrote the chapter. Through the short exchange of Valerie and Carina in the beginning, I could make out that they are very good friends. I loved the small interaction between Albus and Lucy. It brings out their sweet dynamic. Lucy seems like such an adorable girl. Albus has an irritating girlfriend, haha! It seems Carina fancies Albus, though I can't be sure this early in the story. Scorpius is good friends with Albus and is welcome in Albus's family. Everything feels right at the point in the story.

It would be interesting to see how the story unfolds. Your warning has got me further interested in it and I would come back surely for more!

Your Secret Cupid

P.S. I really don't know what happened to the formatting of the last review. Probably something went wrong because I posted it through my phone. :P

Author's Response: Oh Carina definitely does not fancy Al!!! Haha, I find it really funny that it came across that way.

Lea xx

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