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Review #1, by Alliyna707 True Grit

7th February 2016:
OMG I need more... Please give me more!!! This is amazing!

The only critiquing I have is that you could work on grammar and maybe (and this is a huge maybe) could implement some scene description. However, past that, you've got a wonderful story blossoming. You're doing excellent character growth and your plot line is stellar.

Good luck and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Alliyna707,

Thank you so much for your review! I was actually planning on doing a bit more scene description in some upcoming chapters! I will post more this weekend! I will try to work on the grammar a bit more, it's never been my strongest suit and this story seems to be pouring out of me so I haven't been stopping to edit too much (sorry for that!)


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