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Reading Reviews for From the Outside, Looking In
  
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Review #1, by Ignis the Imp Beginning at the End

19th January 2016:
Hello there!

I'm hopping round the archives from story to story and stopping to say a couple of words about the ones that I really like. This caught my eye from the start, and I noticed it's your first story here too. Welcome to HPFF! I know from the time I've spent making mischief here that everybody is very friendly and it's a lot of fun.

This was a brilliant start to a story! I really like the idea behind it. It's great to see that you've thought of three original characters and you want to follow their story in the midst of everything that happened in the books. Harry Potter's a hero, but why should he get all the limelight? People like Jade and me deserve to have our stories told too! (Although nobody's told my story yet. You know, it's a very interesting one, though.)

My favourite thing from this story was the way that you captured Jade's voice. It's only the first chapter - and a short one too - about an OC, but even so I feel like I know her very well. She's got a very strong character coming through in this narrative.

I'm worried about Jade and her friends, and I can't wait to find out more about them. I hope that they're all able to stay safe through the war!

Ignis the Imp

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for the review! Really means a lot that you read the first chapter and were kind enough to leave such a thorough response.

It'll probably be a couple of weeks before I post the next chapter, but I hope you keep reading :)


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