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Reading Reviews for An Unexpected Turn of Events
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RosaLuna The One Where I Kind of Admitted it

23rd February 2016:
I really like your story. Just one question: why does Lily refer to her aunt fleur as Tante? Isn't fleur French?

Author's Response: Thank you.

I did my research and whenever I looked it up the French translation for aunt is tante. :)


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Review #2, by Emma The One Where I Kind of Admitted it

2nd February 2016:
This is so good, please update soon. I love your story

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll be updating soon just in the middle of writing the next chapter now! Stay tuned!

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Review #3, by Bel The One Where Mum Did Some Baking

14th January 2016:
I love that you update so fast! There aren't many stories with Lily as the main character so that is also refreshing.
There are serious grammar and spelling mistakes, though (English is not my first language and yet, I noticed them). I'd also try yo use less swear words.
That's all! Hope to read you again soon! :)

Author's Response: Hi thanks for your review!

I am from Australia and we do spell some words differently but I'll go back through and try to correct them! Thanks for letting me know!

Ok cool I'll take that into consideration. I was trying to think about how young teenagers talk nowadays but I'll give that some thought in my next few chapters too!

Thankyou so much from your feedback I really appreciate it!!


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Review #4, by Lily_Luna123 The One Where I'd Never Felt Like Such a Disappointment

13th January 2016:
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update! :)

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! Stay tuned I'll update again tonight!

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Review #5, by Lily_Luna123 The One Where it All Came into Perspective

12th January 2016:
Just started reading this book and I love it!! I love Lily's stories but there aren't enough of them in my opinion! This story is great! Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I agree poor Lily never gets a run in! I'm so excited to update soon for everyone the next few chapters have been my favourite to write lots of interesting things coming up!

Thanks for reviewing!!


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Review #6, by Laura xx The One Where Red was a Prominant Colour

9th January 2016:
Wow! I absoulutley loved this fan fic I was a but uncertain at the start, but now I just love it so much and I just have to read more! Please update soon the anticipation is killing me! Is it bad that I'm really looking forward to everyone's reactions? What can I say I love drama. Anyways loved this so keep going cause it's truely amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Keep posted they'll all be finding out soon and really not in the way anyone would expect. I'll update really soon! Thanks for your review! X

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