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Reading Reviews for Arrogant Toerag
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RavenclawFTW The Platform

5th February 2016:
Hey Natalie! I love the contrast you've continued here from the last chapter between the families, especially how it ended with such different emotions from James and Lily. Can't wait to read your next update! :)

–J

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Review #2, by RavenclawFTW Prologue: Christmas

5th February 2016:
Hey Natalie! Thanks for pointing me towards this story!

I really love this prologue and your writing style– I'm honestly shocked it hasn't gotten more attention! This is a really beautiful opening to the story, and I feel like I know a lot about the characters already. Seriously, your prose in this is so evocative and beautiful! You've tied in a lot of different descriptions of the characters, the settings, and their family dynamics with a really clear and distinctive voice and it's great to read! I didn't find it boring at all. :)

Also, just a suggestion, but if you're hoping to get a wider audience to read your story like you mentioned in your review, or if you're looking for more critique, I've found that the forums are a great place to meet other writers and get the word out about your story. This is a great story and I hope it gets more recognition!

–J

Author's Response: Hi J,
Wow. You made my week with your reviews! Honestly. I didn't know about the forums- thanks for the info! I'm so glad you like the story so far. Thanks again for your review!


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Review #3, by everBlazin_ Prologue: Christmas

18th January 2016:
Hi!

Love the prologue. Didn't find it boring at all. ;) It's always nice to have some background. Very well written.

Can't wait to meet some other characters and see how your story develops. You set the bar quite high with your first chapter :)

-eB

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! Working on the next chapter. Thanks again! :)
-Natalie


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