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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Emcnary Chapter 1

30th July 2016:
Oh my, this is good!! Complete crap it is NOT! I'd love to see updates, but I'm guessing this is abandoned:(

Author's Response: Not abandoned. On hiatus :)

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Review #2, by The Basilisk Chapter 1

30th December 2015:
Hi it'ss me again.

I love how you've brought in the grown-up Hermione while retaining all the quirks which make up her perssonality. A lot of people tend to forget that she's a girl like any other and she doess love partiess and not just books. I love how you've brought in both thosse aspects of her character into this.

It'ss so cute how Severus viewss her and finally sees the smart, beautiful woman that she iss. This is such a great chapter and really sets the pace for the resst of the story. I can't wait for you to update sso please do so ssoon!

I musst go now. But don't ever sstop writing. You are sso good and you're improving so much as well. Thank you for being a part of thiss site. :)

Author's Response: Basilisk,

Thanks for my review! The last chapter/sentence got me all sniffly. Thank you for the encouragement.

Frankie


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Review #3, by The Basilisk Prologue

30th December 2015:
Hello, it iss the Bassilissk. I hope you had a very Merry Chrisstmass. I just sslithered out of my hole because I got to know I hadn't vissited your page yet. Ssilly mee.

Thiss was such an interessting prologue. I haven't read a lot of Snape/Hermione sstories and I really like how you've begun thiss one. It's definitely like Hermione to know some deeply advanced sspells and I love how you've incorporated that into this fic sso seamlessly. And that final bit about Ssnape thinking it might be Lily - a ssnake like me can't cry but that really touched me. I love how you've begun thiss and I will read on now.

Your writing iss lovely, and I'm sso glad I picked this fic.

Ssee you ssoon. :)

Author's Response: Basilisk,


Thank you for the review!


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Review #4, by TreacleTart Prologue

21st November 2015:
HPFF Twitter Flash Challenge

Hey Frankie!

I was scanning through the new short stories section and came across this story, so I thought I'd come check it out. I'll admit that Snape/Hermione is a pairing that I'm a bit skeptical about, but I've read most of Saving Severus Snape and maybe Meg's started to convert me just a little.

I was really surprised with the direction you went in this (in a good way). Most of the time when I've seen Snape/Hermione stories, it's always been through time travel, so I thought it was a unique choice for it to not start that way.

I am really curious about how Hermione knew this advanced magic. I mean I know she's brilliant, but what sort of source does she have for this particular spell. Does the school library just have this sort of information or is it something that took a ton of research? I'd love to hear the background on this at some point. Maybe in future chapters when she gets a chance to explain what happened?

I also really liked how you had Snape coming back into consciousness towards the ending. His thoughts are still with his love, Lily and I think that's fitting, but I definitely could see how Hermione saving him would be a surprise.

This leads me to wonder how this will cause the story to end. You've kept everything cannon compliant, so how does Severus living change the story? I'll have to read the next chapter when you post it to find out.

A small touch of CC...I did find the part about Voldemort speaking at the beginning to be a little unclear or confusing. Once I read a little further in, I realized that you were talking about when Harry went into the forest, but I think maybe tweaking the way you wrote it just a little bit might make it a little more immediately understandable.

All in all though, great start to the story. I'm sure Meg will be thrilled with such a thoughtful gift. :D

~Kaitlin

Author's Response: Kaitlin,

Meg is doing a great job, I hope I can live up to her expectations!

I didn't really want to use time travel because - like you said it's used a lot.

I will probably use future chapters to explain everything :) although- sorry about the confusion at the beginning with voldy's voice. That was set during the 7th book when Voldemort used his mega voice to talk throughout Hogwarts to call HP to him.

Anyway, I am always so appreciative for your reviews and want to hug you a million times!

Frankie


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Review #5, by Unicorn_Charm Prologue

18th November 2015:
Aww Frankie!!! *hug* *hug* *hug*

Ok. Let me start out by saying, stop your silliness! :p This story will most certainly not be "crap" because you are a fantastic author, and I know you'll write an amazing story. This prologue alone proves that, because it was just so, so, so good! *flails*

And siriusly ;) THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! You have NO idea how much it means to me that, not only are you writing a story for me, but you're doing one that is outside your comfort zone. That truly means the world to me and I could just squish you for ages! *more hugs*

I loved this. Truly, absolutely and totally loved it! I told you that I would be honest, so believe me when I say that this was amazing. I so cannot wait to see where you go with this! Eeeep! I'm so excited!!

That last bit with Snape. Oh. Em. Gee. So he knows it's Hermione, but what does me make of that?! Gah! I want to know what happens. Like right now!

I loved the little details in this. Like how Hermione assumed that Snape wasn't dead because of the experience with her cousin being bitten. I love how she was totally in character and was thinking logically and knew to send for Madam Pomfrey and just gah! Perfect! I honestly can't say anything but good things about this, and not just because it's Hermione/Snape and a gift. You really have captured my interest in this. So you'll have to forgive me when I pester you about it daily now. :p You've created a monster haha.

Really, thank you. This is one of my all time favorite ships, and like I said before, it really does mean so much to me.

All the love and hugs!
Meg ♥

Author's Response: Hey Meg!

I am still so excited about this story for you! You deserve it! I should probably get to writing more of it, but you haven't pestered me like you said you would ;)

But thanks for encouraging me to step out of my comfort zone and to write and to give this difficult ship a go. You are wonderful and I hope the story does you justice!

Frankie


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