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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by xoxo_jpotter Bloody Holiday

23rd November 2015:
Poor Lily. Her relationship with her family is so sad! At least she has Scorpius, but his family is pretty messed up too.
I'm really excited to see where this goes, so I hope you update soon!

xoxo
-M

Author's Response: Yay, it makes me so happy that you're enjoying it so far :) I'm putting a chapter in the queue right now!

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Review #2, by xoxo_jpotter Suspended

23rd November 2015:
Aw , just the thought of losing Harry Potter is sad. I feel so bad for Lily, and it's horrible that she feels like she's going through this alone!
Just one thing I want to mention is you seemed to have slipped into first person POV for a couple of sentences. It doesn't throw the story off, I just thought I'd tell you.

xoxo
-M

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I totally agree :/

Ah, thank you so much for pointing that out...This author seems to have fallen asleep on the job...Will go back and edit that as soon as I get the next chapter up!


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Review #3, by xoxo_jpotter The Beginning of the End

23rd November 2015:
This is really different from most next gen stories, especially your characterizations of Lily and Scorpius! I felt so bad for the both of them, but it feels realistic that they would feel that way about their families.
And oh my gosh! You ended your first chapter like that! If I didn't have more to read I'd be going crazy!

xoxo
-M

Author's Response: Awww thank you for being the first to review my story! I'm so happy.

I'm so glad you enjoy my characterizations...the amount of thinking I do about Lily and Scorpius's characterizations is probably excessive, haha, but I'm having way too much fun with them already. I'm glad it's "different", too - I've been trying to stay away from the Next Gen cliches without intentionally making up "unique" things just to stay away from a cliche, if that makes sense at all, haha.


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