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Review #1, by ScorpiusRose17 Broken Pieces

18th November 2015:
Hi!

So I am finally getting around to reading and reviewing the astounding list of Challenge entries I have received.

I really liked this because I don't normally read about Percy or Penelope for that matter, so this was truly a treat! I liked the way that you use the proverb because the entire time I am reading, all I can do is judge how much of a meanie Percy is being. I shouldn't be judging him because he knows he's wrong and I know he's wrong. This was well done and I loved your take on this lost moment of his life that we don't get to see.

Good Luck in the Challenge! :)

-Jenn

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
It took a while to figure out what to write for this challenge, and I'm glad you liked it. It seems I also had your last challenge on the brain when I wrote Broken Pieces.
I've grown to like Percy recently, and I'm a fan of Penelope based on what little we know about her. I enjoyed writing her as a strong and an almost hopelessly optimistic woman.


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