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Review #1, by The Basilisk Red and Brown

17th December 2015:
Why hello there deliciousss writer mwhaha, you’ve be selected as my newest snack!

Very ssshort and dynamic story you’ve spun here! That first redheaded creature is disgusting and must be destroyed. I’m happy Hermione find solace in the sister, the much more giving/smart/funny sister. I wonder how they noticed each other and how they’re love grew. What about Harry too?

While I love, love, love the imagery here. I don’t think Hermione would’ve ever experienced a sand storm in a city or a wave in a desert, which is spelled desert and not dessert btw, so I’m not sure if she knows exactly what these senssations feel like but the impact is great here to portray her emotions ;)

She should have a Basilisk for a pet, we are wonderfully devoted creatures. Very loving, and you’ll never heed a mirror and we’ll always do your bidding. Yes, doll, get one of my fellow sisters to cheer you up! Or she can stick with her lovely new ginger in that giant manor of happiness together.

Hiss hiss,
The Basilisk

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