Reading Reviews for Aala Lana Fana
  
20 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Padfootfan777 The New House.

25th October 2007:
strange house

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Review #2, by Padfootfan777 Dreams come true

25th October 2007:
good job

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Review #3, by Padfootfan777 Eaglebar Seventh years

25th October 2007:
nice job. you did ok{~_~}

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Review #4, by Padfootfan777 The big Joke!

25th October 2007:
that was amusing and im not being sarcastic


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Review #5, by Padfootfan777 The Facts

25th October 2007:
harry luves aala thatas so sweet

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Review #6, by Padfootfan777 Sleeping together

25th October 2007:
she should uv slept with harry

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Review #7, by Padfootfan777 House Pride

25th October 2007:
nice and sorry to hear about your boyfriend{~_~}

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Review #8, by devayani Eaglebar Seventh years

9th May 2007:
please why the status is abondoned? i would be pleased if you continue the story

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Review #9, by devayani The Facts

9th May 2007:
ok i liked it

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Review #10, by devayani Sleeping together

9th May 2007:
aala did not say anything when draco kissed her?

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Review #11, by devayani House Pride

9th May 2007:
i think it was better to sleep with harry

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Review #12, by devayani The New House.

9th May 2007:
lol! th part in which draco and aalatalk is fantastic!

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Review #13, by devayani Dreams come true

9th May 2007:
its good

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Review #14, by wishes Eaglebar Seventh years

24th July 2006:
it is confusing as i read this passage you need to make corrections on the grammar it does not make sense at all.

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Review #15, by wishes The Facts

24th July 2006:
fix the spelling its horrible to read trying to understand the words


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Review #16, by wishes Sleeping together

24th July 2006:
needs a lot of grammar but its good i loved it

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Review #17, by me Eaglebar Seventh years

1st December 2004:
K there are major spelling mistakes here, you need to fix them girl! Get at it now! move on and right more! leave thoose Im's and go type more fan fic!

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Review #18, by Ambariel Dreams come true

11th June 2004:
this is good i love that harry has friends like aala. hmm why is she in slytherin? hmmm.

Author's Response: Sorry Its been forever to begin with. I have a new Computer, and have yet to figer out how to lower my 'cookies' on it so that I can log onto fanfiction. I have a lot more to post it may just be a long while untill Im able to do so. Thanks though and Im glad harry has aala to. And trust me theres a reason shes in Slytherin. After all her parents were.

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Review #19, by SecreteKeeper Eaglebar Seventh years

13th May 2004:
No one like? Hmmmm please what can I do to make it better besides add the next chapter which will be up hopefully soon. Schools takeing a lot out of me with homework so I dont have much time to type, Then again hopefully in two weeks I'll have a new computer and it will make everything a lot eaiser! 15 days til my sweet sixteen!

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Review #20, by Serpentine Dreams come true

26th April 2004:
You are a very descriptive author and I really liked you writing style. Keep going please!

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