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Reading Reviews for Paying For His Mistakes
  
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Avanell 2 Chapter Three

21st November 2015:
Another fun run in with Potter...now for Scorpius and Rose...will we read more of them or just the Malfoy ice princess seeing them huddled together or something ;) INquiring minds want to know...and to read!

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Review #2, by annimal16 Chapter Three

18th November 2015:
I love the story!
Pleas add more shapters

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Review #3, by Avanell 2 Chapter Two

15th November 2015:
Interesting, loved the second chapter (but am a Rose fan so cannot WAIT for her and Scorpius to get together...I did see them in the pairings, right?). And so interesting reaction to Albus ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!! Yes there will be definite Scorpius/Rose cause they are amazing :)


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Review #4, by Avanell 2 Chapter One

15th November 2015:
Interesting opener! Love when Draco is a good family man, so sorry about his love!

Author's Response: The love for Draco and his family is one of my main points in this story. I love a good family man too. :)

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Review #5, by Siriusly21 Chapter Two

12th November 2015:
Hey, I really like your story! If you want a banner go to the dark arts website and create an account. If you post a thread it'll get done. It sounds confusing but if you go to the site it will make sense.
Back to the story, longer chapters would be good so we could get an in depth look into the characters without being cut off. Also check how your write dialogue. There were a few times where you switched characters but didn't change lines. I like the idea and you're doing a great job of making it dramatic

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate all the advice and help :)

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Review #6, by beka_wotter Chapter Two

12th November 2015:
The review I put on the first chapter was meant to be for this one haha which is why it says 'another' but yeah just clearing that up :p x

Author's Response: I understand!!

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Review #7, by beka_wotter Chapter One

12th November 2015:
Another good chapter but I think you should maybe aim to make the chapters a bit longer but I'm looking forward to the next one! x

Author's Response: I will! I had a really long chapter but it just got cut off and edited weird.
Thank you for all your feedback :)


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