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Review #1, by potterfan206 Inseparable

9th November 2015:
I really like how you set up the characters, but make sure that the Hufflepuff Common Room isn't being turned into the Gryffindor Common Room. Such as the portrait at the entrance, correct me if I'm mistaken but didn't Hufflepuff have the barrels that spilled wine if you got the incorrect combination? Also I'm not 100% sure but the dormitories are not upstairs, they are on the same level and are just two circular doors. I love both Becca and Ella, two very contrasting characters that when they are put together it makes a sort-off rebel team, no? AWESOME story! I'm looking forward to reading more of it!

Author's Response: I think you are correct with the Hufflepuff common room. I just checked, and they do have barrels. And they aren't upstairs, the Hufflepuff common room is on the same level as the kitchens, which means there probably wouldn't be any stairs (judging as they're not in a tower). I might change it, but I'm thinking that I could make it so all the common rooms had a similar design. Is that weird, or too 'not-canon'? Thank you for your review, and you're correct about the rebel team. I'm finishing up my second chapter today and hope to get it up soon!

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