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Review #1, by Gabriella Hunter A Despicable Man

3rd November 2015:
Hello!

This is Gabbie from the forums dropping by with a swap to welcome you back! I missed you! I'm really curious about this story, it sounds like something completely unique.

So, Paul is like the worst person ever. I know that some people would be put off from a character like that but I think it's genius. I love finding stories like this that don't necessarily feature a hero or shy away from making their characters nasty or just plain mean spirited. I never write Death Eater or anything (yet) but there's something really interesting about this man that you've created.

I suddenly want to know everything about him and I have to say that his views on the world are kind of leaning towards psychotic. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for and correct me if I'm wrong but he's got a subtle disdain for everyone and quite the superiority complex. It just makes me want to cringe, though it does make his train of thought very interesting. I wonder what he's up to though? I can only imagine the possibilities and it seems like it's pretty shady too, he must have been doing this for some time or had a darker relationship with is debtor than I realize. Poor guy. I hope he'll be okay but apparently, he might be in for more than he bargained and Paul doesn't seem like the sort of person to let someone forget.

What's genius about his character though is that he can blend in so well. No one at his office really suspects what kind of person he really is, aside from Morgan and it makes me curious on what she noticed about him to dislike so much. Hm. I'm sure that we'll find out more about that later but that drug bust sounds fishy. Justin should be more careful about the spreading gossip. :p

So, totally digging this first chapter and I didn't spot anything that you need to worry about. Only, you need to update soon because I won't be satisfied for long! :D

Much love,

Gabbie

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