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Review #1, by looneylizzie prologue

23rd May 2016:
Hey! I'm here to review your story for the Demotivator Challenge!!

Okay, WOW. This. Is. AMAZING!

I didn't expect someone to take this Demotivator and go down the afterlife route, but I have to say, it TOTALLY makes sense! And you've done a phenomenal job with it so far!!

I love the way that you've introduced the concept of heaven to little Hugo - he's such a smart and curious child, and it makes sense for a little kid to ask so many questions about something that's so difficult to understand in the first place. You've written him so realistically too! He really feels like a kid - which is a hard thing to write for a lot of people! :D

The fact that Hugo is SO curious and wants to know what heaven is like actually makes me kind of nervous! What if he decides to "venture forth"? Will he be the exception to the rule and come back? That'd certainly be interesting...

Regardless, this story is absolutely fantastic, and I really can't wait to see more of it! I hope you're still planning on working on it!

Thank you so much for entering in my challenge! The results should be posted soon!

Keep writing!

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