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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by xoxo_jpotter  Chapter 3:Daisy Maisy and Kevin Shevin

15th February 2016:
This was a good little introduction to all of her friends! Really curious to see her relationship with James grows, and I want to see Kevin's reaction to it all!

All in all this was great, and I'm so happy that they seem to have accepted Dominique because she's great!

xoxo
-M

Author's Response: I am glad that you liked Kevin and Daisy. And with James its bound to take some time.
Accepting Dominique would be a bit hard for uh Kevin but they'll make it work.
Thank you so much for the review. It really means a lot. :')


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Review #2, by naughtforreal The afternoon that turned out to be 'not so bad'

12th November 2015:
James is a meanie. Poor Al puppy. And why doesn't Denise like puppies? They're *puppies*! Anyway, JSP better sort out his attitude and I hope D gets to show him.

I like how you described James, btw. It made me swoon. Darn those eyes. And darn those hair! Someone is living up to his namesake hah!

Update soon~

Author's Response: Haha, James is the meanest just saying.
Denise got bitten by a fiery hound when she was six. I mean, could you love dogs after that? :o
And yes, James is living up to both his namesakes ;)
Thanks for reviewing and I'll update soon, HOPEFULLY!


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Review #3, by naughtforreal Dramatic introductions by Denise Leopold

12th November 2015:
Hi! It's me. Creepin' and peepin'

ANYWAY, foremost. I like Denise! She rambles! I feel like she's an adorable nerd bird and it's interesting how she talks passionately about things like books and...James. Hah. It's cute how she knows she fancies Jamiepoo deep down under but would much rather dissolve those feelings into good ol' hatin'. She doesn't like feelings much, does she? --> I can totally relate.

Constructive criticism jumping in, (I'm not that good at this welp!) I think that maybe you info dump too much. I mean, from what I've learned through various reading and stuff, it's nice if you maintain an air of mystery amongst the characters. Don't worry. I used to do this a lot too! Bec ya know, when something's out there, it feels like it should be out there

But OVERALL, it feels like a promising story! Oh and how dare you kiss someone at Nana's house Jamesiepoo! Tsk, tsk.

I'm on to your next chapter~

Author's Response: OHMYGOD! I love you. This review was so sweet, you are so sweet.
And she likes him, yes but he's kinda like a douche in my story. Sorry, but had to make him this way ._. cuz otherwise the story wont work
Thank you for liking the rambling Denise. She loves you too :')
And I am working on not giving too much information. Ya know? But it just comes out .-.
And he wasn't kissing her, just playing with her things. Annoying JSP things :D
In short, thankss so much for the review. It was the best!


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Review #4, by xoxo_jpotter The afternoon that turned out to be 'not so bad'

26th October 2015:
Aw, Dominique is so sweet! Why are people mean to her?! And oh my gosh, I can't believe that James would punch Al! He's being ridiculous, and I hope he pulls himself together soon!

xoxo
-M

PS Is this story going to take place when they're at Hogwarts, or is it just a summer story?

Author's Response: People are mean they kinda use her cuz of her family status, war heroes and all. You'll have to see how this works out.
James has his reasons for punching Al too. He doesn't do anything without a reason contrary to popular belief xD and he'll pull himself together, don't worry! :)
And no, ALL of it is not going to take place in the summer, just like 4 or 5 chapters and then we'll be aboard the Hogwarts Express!
And thankyou so much for reviewing. It means a lot! :)
Your reviews make my day.


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Review #5, by xoxo_jpotter Dramatic introductions by Denise Leopold

13th October 2015:
Omg hiii! ! ! (just a warning, I use a lot of exclamation points and italics!)

So, this is your first fafic, right? How exciting!

I liked Denise's inner thoughts. She's so sarcastic! You've definitely got inner thoughts down, which is some I struggled (and still struggle) with, so good job!

I totally thought that this was going to be one of those typical hate relationship, so I love that she has a crush on James from the start (even though she kind of doesn't like him)

I think you've got a great start, and I can't wait to see how this plays out! One thing I would suggest would be to make your huge blocks of text into smaller ones. It makes it easier for the reader.

Also, a banner really helps your story get noticed, and the people over at The Dark Arts are so talented, so you might want to look into it!

xoxo
-M

Author's Response: Heyy! And yes this is my first fanfic :D i am so excited eep. I love that you like the VERY sarcastic Denise Leopold. What can I say? I like sarcasm :')
And yes, she likes him but she hates his guts.You'll have to see how this works out. This review means a lot to me! I'll look into your suggestions too. Thanks again and i shall update soon :)


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