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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Glisten  Draco starts anew

14th July 2017:
I was reading your review on another story and I thought I'd check out your author page. I can imagine it would be hard being a first time writer and not getting much feedback. I haven't written any stories of my own yet but I plan to soon, until then my goal is to help everyone out by offering my thoughts.

It's interesting that Draco went completely into the muggle world and I'm hoping there's going to be more clarification on that later. Of all the people who would abandon the magical life, Draco Malfoy would probably be last on my list so the story for that should be pretty interesting!

Just some quick constructive criticism: I think the reason your story isn't getting very much attention is because of your title. There was a Dramoine posted on the website many years ago titled "Two to Tango" and you can still see it in the HPFF Top Tens. It's been removed from the site, but it looks like the story got a lot of attention before it was removed, and for the most part people don't like reading stories with similar titles to popular fanfics. I don't judge stories by their titles, though, because I know some people don't know that stories with similar titles exist.

Anyways, this is an interesting start and I'll be waiting for your next chapter! Good job!

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Review #2, by heartsnpancakes Draco starts anew

9th October 2015:
Sounds interesting! The story seems to jump just a bit, though I'm sure you have your own reason for that since it's only the first chapter. I'll be following this story so update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for a comment! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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