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Reading Reviews for Addiction
1 Reviews Found

Review #1, by XOdannieXO Prologue: First encounter

3rd October 2015:
It is a really nice start. I definitely enjoy your stle of writing, the words you use and how you phrase everything. Very good. The conversations: the only thing i would change is the format. You put bullet points in front of they're dialogues. It would look much better with quotation marks.

Other than that, it's beyond an amazing start.


Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep in mind your advice and I am vey tahnkful for your review... I was not expecting any so I really am very happy... I hope you like the rest of the story: I got a little sidetracked with the new chapters but I will be posting very soon!

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