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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Rumpelstiltskin Spotlight

13th October 2015:
Holy guacamole. I didn't see that coming.

(Oh, yes...hello!)

Theo's love for Lavender seems almost tragically sweet at first, but the signs of obsession are most definitely there (counting down the seconds on the clock). Initially, I feel so bad for Theo, because I want to trust my narrator and almost immediately know that he loves her. I do, however, *love* the thrill of an unreliable narrator, which you've given me.

I also loved the section where Theo's looking at the old photograph and reminiscing. The exchange of vows, playing as children of course, was oh-so sweet. When Blaise brings him the parchment with Ron's name, I can only fear the worst. He immediately snaps from fond memories to bitter resentment. Then, of course, this ominous bit, "For me, it's always been real" left me with goosebumps!

His realization, due to her bluntness, that she was in love with Ron, and his anger that followed was very intense. Theo's mind is a racing psychopathic hotspot in this, and I love every second. When Lavender and Ron come to an end, I almost, *almost* expected Theo to reel back from his psychotic meltdown. "I smile at this news, and I wait." Silly me.

Then, of course -- holy guacamole. I just didn't expect it, this was an expertly crafted plot twist that came out of nowhere. It definitely blew me away. He killed Padma so that she wouldn't break Lavender's heart -- "I am your knight in shining armour". THIS is brilliant! I'm speechless!

Fantastic job! ♥

-Rumpel

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Review #2, by The Basilisk Spotlight

9th October 2015:
Greetings

Your words drew my attention. Darkness of the current season is one of my favorite timesss of year. I have been ssseeking words that appeal to that dark nature.

In reading I thought you had failed to capture the darkness. That this was nothing more than a bit of fluff suiting only for that time of year as the darkness of winter fadesss. Yet, you drew things in for the kill, quite literally.

The dark, the power and emotion evoked by Nott was very nice s. I am fond of how he jussstifies himself. Indeed the play is murder and I like it. Makes me quessstion how many more Nott would kill if thingsss were to continue.

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Review #3, by alicia and anne Spotlight

17th September 2015:
AHHH! I AM FINALLY HERE AND I AM SO EXCITED I CAN BARELY CONTAIN MYSELF! THIS WAS SUCH AN AWESOME SURPRISE! I CAN'T WAIT! :D

EEKKK! SO MUCH EXCITEMENT! And Lavender has to sit with Theo and I'm so excited I can't contain myself! He's waiting for her! He's couting down the clock! I SHIP IT SO HARD! SO VERY HARD! HE's staring at her! He's so adorable! :D

What happened between them? :O TELL ME!!! DON'T BREAK THIS SHIP!

o they grew up together! This is interesting! :D

Awww that picture is adorable! :D OH MY GOD! DID THEY HAVE A PRETEND WEDDING?! YOU'RE KILLING ME RIGHT NOW! ACTUALLY KILLING ME! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! HIS SPEECH IS SO ADORABLE!

NO! Blaise don't interrupt the love with that note! Damn you Ron! Go away! Theo and Lavender need to be together! IT's love!

Oh no! And now they're arguing! Why are you doing this to me? *attempts to push them together and make kissy noises* WORK DAMN IT! She likes him! We all know it!

Poor Theo, I want to hug him so badly, I want to tell him that it'll be alright, she'll come around. She loves you! I know it!

He's planning something! I am excited! :D Oh wait... it's a murder... maybe I shouldn't be excited...

Oh! Does Theo think that Lavender poisoned Ron?

I absolutely love the line "You were the pawn, sacrificed to capture Weasley's queen."

NO! She shouldn't be with Padma, she needs to be with Theo!

Damn it, Theo! Now how are we going to explain this?!

I wasn't expecting that ending of murder! Haha

I am so glad that you wrote me this! I love it! Even if you made Theo out to be a psycho! ( I absolutely love psycho Theo, and now I require you to write me lots of psycho Theo so I can love him more!)

LOVE THIS SO MUCH! THANK YOU! YOU'RE THE BEST FRIEND EVER! I LOVE YOU!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

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