Reading Reviews for Amongst the Roses
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Review #1, by Dojh167 Prologue: On the Lake

25th March 2016:
I absolutely love reading peoples' stories about their OTPs! There is so much passion and thought behind them, and this is no exception! I wouldn't normally be interested in Harry/Seamus, but since you're writing it, that's a different story.

I think your description here is really great. By describing the physical world, you really clearly set the stage for the emotional state of the castle and Harry.

You said Fred was the least humorous person in the castle. Did you mean George?

I was a little surprised when Harry yelled at Seamus. It felt very harsh and explosive, but not out of character considering the situation.

Your use of the word stump here is a bit redundant, and I'm not sure if it's deliberate: "Harry leaned back against the stump, stumped at what he had just heard"

With the dark tone of the beginning of this chapter, I expected the romance to be a slow build, and I was really pleasantly surprised to see otherwise!

Harry was really sweet and thoughtful when he found out that was Seamus' first kiss.

There is not really any backstory here for what happened before this that we don't know from canon. It really makes me curious! How long have they liked each other? How mutual are their feelings? Have they both been open about liking guys? I'm so curious!

The whole ending is incredibly sweet! But it did so in a way that was very believable in the context of the darkness, and didn't ignore it but worked with it.

I'm going to keep reading this, but I may not have time to review, as I'm trying to read a lot as quickly as I can. This story just made me really want to give some feedback!


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Review #2, by The Love Bandit Prologue: On the Lake

15th February 2016:
*swoops in dramatcially on feathered wing*

Kyle, my man.

Harry and Seamus was, I admit, not a pairing I'd much considered but the way you've portrayed them in this makes me rather interested in pursuring the ship. Look at you go, converting an Old cupid like me to these new ships.

Keep up the good work, darling.

May you arrows ever fly true,
The Love Bandit

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Review #3, by alicia and anne Prologue: On the Lake

10th January 2016:
Yay!! I get to read Seamus and Harry! (Although I'm totally sure that I've already read this, I just hadn't reviewed it)

Oh Harry! I'm glad that Seamus didn't keep his distance from Harry and chose to go over to him. Harry needs Seamus to make him realise that the people didn't just fight for Harry, that they had been fighting alongside him for a chance to make a better world for everyone.

AHHH! YES! Harry was the one to start the kiss! He so wants Seamus!



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Review #4, by Secret Snowflake Prologue: On the Lake

16th December 2015:
Hi Kyle (waves meekly)!

I hope you are having a nice Christmas season so far, and I thought that it might me nice to drop by and leave this little story a review.

I love the way you characterised Seamus. You had him true to his canon personality, while still adding you own little flair to make it your own. I can't say that I've ever considered the possibility of a relationship between Harry and Seamus before, but it is intriguing. I think that you wrote it rather well.

I'm rather surprised that this story doesn't have any reviews yet, it was really lovely to read.

Merry Christmas,
Your Secret Snowflake

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