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Reading Reviews for In Moonlight
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by TheEmotionalTeaspoon In Moonlight

10th April 2016:
Oh wow! This is wonderfully written. I haven't seen many Remus/Sirius ships floating around but I thought I'd give this a read because I can definitely see the potential in the pairing. And you definitely fulfilled that potential!

I can imagine Sirius and Remus being super caring and connected, but also a little jokey and fun, and I think you struck the perfect balance between those sides. I loved the way you described Remus watching Sirius, and how the twinkle in Sirius's eyes seemed to shine brighter when he caught him staring. (Eeep!)

Oh and the ending! Heartbreaking! Just after they'd got together!

I think this is a brilliantly written piece, I really love your style!

-Kate x

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Review #2, by SunshineDaisies In Moonlight

1st November 2015:
Okay the review I left on And Then was so not quality I thought I would definitely come leave you another one :)

This was like a punch in the gut man. I'm not a huge fan of Wolfstar, but once in a while I find a really delightful portrayal, and this is definitely one of them. I love the way you wrote their characters, especially Sirius. He was so perfectly snarky and broken and sweet. He had some really excellent one-liners that I quite literally giggled at. I loved seeing him be so vulnerable with Remus, at both points, and it hurts so much to know that they only got to have those few precious moments together.

And Remus was so wonderful. Nervous and cautious and self-martyring. I loved getting to see things from his perspective, and I think it made Sirius's vulnerability even more pronounced, because we're seeing it from the perspective of someone who sees him as this cool, collected person.

It's really excellent characterization.

AND THEN THE END. MY GOD THE END. I knew that was coming but it didn't hurt any less when Sirius was gone and Dumbledore was there telling him James and Lily were dead and I spent all day yesterday NOT thinking about them being killed AND YOU JUST THREW IT IT MY FACE DEE THAT IS VERY RUDE.

Anyway, this was an absolutely fantastic story and I'm very glad I snuck over to read it:)

Author's Response: KATIE♥

I'm not an avid WolfStar shipper either, but I think they're a plausible ship, though not one that would ever have had anything but an angst-filled time of their relationship :p

I'm sorry for throwing the sadness in your face, Katie! Please forgive me :p

I adore you♥

Dee


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Review #3, by alicia and anne In Moonlight

10th September 2015:
YES!!! WOLFSTAR!!! I AM SO EXCITED RIGHT NOW! SO VERY EXCITED! I DONT KNOW HOW I'M GOING TO CONTAIN HOW MUCH.

Awww poor Remus, I want to hug him, but as I'm not there I shall settle for Sirius hugging him :P

I can understand totally how Peter would get distracted by all those Goblin names, I would too haha.

Awww I am loving your Sirius already! (Although I totally love everything you write anyways because you're so awesome!)

And Sirius is there! :D YAY!!

YES YES YES YES YES! YES! I LOVE THAT THEY'RE KISSING AND THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED IT AND THE FACT THAT REMUS HAS A DIFFERENT ANIMAL INSIDE OF HIM. DAMN YOU TRANSFORMATION INTERRUPTING THE KISSING!

AND NOW THEY'RE SHARING LOOKS! YOU ARE KILLING ME! I AM DEAD AND I WANT THEM TO KISS AGAIN SO BADLY! GAH! I NEED IT ALL!

Oh no! That date! And he's gone to see Remus and noone will know and I just want to cry! don't do this to me! :(

NO! I DON'T ACCEPT THAT ENDING, I shall pretend that Albus was merely saying that Lily and James are fine and that him and Sirius can get married... yes. Denial, it's a beautiful thing!

This was brilliant! and I shall now how to demand (nicely of course) that you write me so much Wolfstar so that I can enjoy your fabulous writing! :D

Author's Response: HAI TAMMI!♥

I love your excitement over WolfStar :p Thank you so much for this gorgeous shouty caps review, it really made my day! And I am fully on board with your not accepting of the ending, I'll join your denial party :p WolfStar plunnies keep attacking me at random times so it's very likely I'll write another one some day :)

Dee


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Review #4, by writeyourheartout In Moonlight

10th September 2015:
D e e e e e e e e e e e e e e ! ! ! ♥

You are just... I can't even. I had no idea when I opened this up that it was dedicated to me. I just wanted to read it all on my own because it was you and it was WolfStar and it was a no-brainer. Gah. You got me good, you wonderful, devious, brilliant, sneaky, phenomenal, crafty little doll, you.

I love the way this opens. Your description is so lovely and fitting and I could picture Remus trying to subtly ease his close-to-moon pains, the poor lamb. And he and Sirius in class together... hehehe They are just adorbs. I love them so much. Sirius' note to Remus is - by the way - hilarious. AND I LOVE THAT REMUS BIT HIS COLLAR TO KEEP FROM LAUGHING COULD HE BE ANYMORE ENDEARING I THINK NOT UGH.

I love the way you describe the Shrieking Shack, too. Those details really brought the space to life, and I thought the gnawing on chairs thing was a fascinating combination of original, upsetting, and adorable. Not sure how you managed that, but... yup. :-p

Awww! Sweet Sirius... a rare sight indeed! hehehe AND THEN WHEN HE RESTS HIS HEAD ON REMUS' SHOULDER. *SQUEE* (Just make-out already, am I right?)

I'm assuming you agree with that question, cause HELLO! Eee! ♥

The way you cut it off was really great. It was an intense moment for a handful of reasons, and I love how you cut it so close to his transformation.

BUT THEN THEY DON'T TALK ABOUT IT OR DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT FOR YEARS? WHY! STUPID PUPPIES. GET IT TOGETHER! >.<

But then - YAY - they get their moment together again! But why, Dee, why did it have to happen on the night of... of... *sniff* You're so mean. How come all your WolfStar's have sad endings?? *sniff*

The way you describe this moment here, I just adore: They could have been seventeen again, with nothing more to worry about than being given separate detentions. They werenít in the midst of a war, putting their lives at risk every day in various Order assignments; they were hiding in the shrieking shack, kissing for the first time. - Gorgeous. And I love how you drew that parallel back to their first kiss. ♥

But then, of course... Sirius is gone in the morning. And Remus knows nothing. And Dumbledore is crying. And James and Lily. Dot. Dot. Dot.

*sniff*

This was really so lovely, Dee. And all the more impressive because you wrote it in, like, three and a half seconds. (Teach me your ways.)

Thank you so much for this. I was so surprised to see my name at the end of this and have it dedicated to me. And I promise you, it made me do so much more than simply smile. You are wonderful. I just adore you. Thank you again. Gah. ♥

xTanya

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