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Reading Reviews for Dysfunctional Sorceress
  
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Review #1, by The Basilisk Prologue - In Plain Sight

30th October 2015:
Hello, BlackMidnight13

How interessting that you chose a Peverell desscendant for this sstory, I wonder what her firsst name is. The fact that her heritage is to be hidden during her time at Hogwartsss is rather intriguing, I wonder if McGonagall took that into conssideration before ssending out the acceptance letter.

I noticed something small: the digits in a date are written after the month in the English language, so it should be "September 1st" or "July 31st" instead of "1 September" or "31 July".

I liked the descriptions and the structure is very smooth. This was a very captivating first chapter!

I really enjoyed the dialogues between the twins, it was wonderfully timed and so in sync, it fit perfectly.
I wonder what it is that was in there acceptance letters and what impact it will have on their future!

The Basilisssk

Author's Response: In America, yes, the date is written after the month, but I was trying to make the story as authentic as possible, and in Europe, the date is written before the month, from the smallest unit to the largest: Day/Month/Year.
I do not know if I will reveal what was in the twins' acceptance letters, but if I do, it will be later on in the story.
I'm very glad you liked it, and I hope to be updating soon!


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