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Review #1, by Frankie05 Chapter 2

4th December 2015:
Lea,

Omg do lily and Remus like each other. OMG omg OMG. Yes please yes. I would love that!

Hermione of course would come out of nowhere and take over as top of class. I would expect nothing less from her. But she's not all flirty with Remus but Lily thinks so. OMG I can't get over that. I need it.

I like that Susan takes control of a situation. Like lily is upset and Susan recognizes she's tired and probably overreacting. and takes care of it. Then explains to Hermione. I'm really liking Susan.

You are doing a great job and I'm so excited for this story. So thank you!!!

Author's Response: Hmmm, my lips are sealed on that one. You'll have to wait and see ;)

I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, the next chapter should be up soon!

Lea xx


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Review #2, by Frankie05 Chapter 1

4th December 2015:
Lea, I like the slow build up! It's quite nice for the reader to get acclimated to the story like Hermione is getting acclimated to the new way of life!

I live that Lily was the messy one. It was nice of you to put that as a detail we can fall back on from the books.

And then we meet the blessed marauders. I love them so much. Lily was kind of harsh! Whoosh. She must really not like them.

Was James pretending to be Sirius and that is why she was laughing. That part confused me a little bit. But I am really looking forward to where you are taking this.

To answer you question- Susan seems nice. She seems uptight but also very kind. I'm excited that you are excited for her character! Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Hey Frankie,

Yes, James was pretending to be Sirius in that section, sorry that it confused you.

I'm glad you like Susan, as I said she will be a major plot point.

Lea xx


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Review #3, by Frankie05 Prologue

4th December 2015:
Lea :)

You are so kind and I love this story. I thought I wrote a review the last time I read it but I guess I didn't!

Anyway! This is so exciting :) I love a good Hermione/Snape fix and I'm excited to see where this is headed! You've set it up so nicely. Hermione in her Pjs. I'm curious to see how Lily will react when she meets Hermione!


In the second paragraph there is a point of view change, you have a sentence in second person whole everything else is in 3rd person. Thought I should tell you!

Also, go with whatever flow You want. I'm just excited to read it!!

Frankie

Author's Response: Hey Frankie,

I'm glad you are happy with this story, I'm really enjoying writing it!

Thanks for pointing that out, I'll fix that sentence up when I get a chance.

Lea xx


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