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Review #1, by Secret Cupid Lemon Drop

15th February 2016:
Hello again!

What an amusing tale! That Dumbledore is incredibly mischievous! I rather enjoyed seeing him make Snape participate inAnd the candy costumes were such a clever idea! It certainly seems like something Dumbledore would enjoy doing. I do wish we had gotten a little more description about what everyone was wearing, simply because I think it would be entertaining. Not that it detracts from the story at all!

Another lovely story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing =)

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Review #2, by The Basilisk Lemon Drop

4th November 2015:

I hear that thisss is the month in which people are writing a large sssum of wordsss and you my dear are one of them.

I wanted to stop by and urge you to write more. Wordsss is what I read to passs the time. You have a talent with them, as I can sssee with thisss story alone.

I like how you show a different ssside to Dumbeldore. The Lemon Drop appearsss to be quite dangerousss. I am particularly fond of the sssuit your but the Potionsss Massster in. Quite amusssing if I do sssay ssso myssself.

I enjoyed the read and I look forward to sssee what more you decide to produce. This old sssnake needsss many thingsss to read.


Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm pleased you enjoyed this little one shot. Hopefully you will be back for more of my stories too.

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Review #3, by MrsJaydeMalfoy Lemon Drop

12th September 2015:
Hahaha! This is SO MUCH FUN, I just can't even right now! Before I even finish writing this review, this is going in my favorites! *Adds to favorites*

I LOVE how you've given Dumbledore such a happy-go-lucky, but also prankster/menacing personality! To imagine him purposely trying to embarrass the other staff is just SO FUNNY! And *LITERALLY* forcing them to dress like candies?! Bahaha!

The fact that you mentioned that Harry's starting at Hogwarts this year near the end kind of gave me a nostalgic feel.. it makes me think 'Maybe this is what things really were like at Hogwarts, before all the staff had to worry about defending Harry and the school and Horcruxes and Voldemort returning, etc'. And, although it makes me happy to see them having so much fun, it also makes me very sad to know what's in store for them later on. So, this was pretty bittersweet, but still a lot of fun, and I really enjoyed it!

Another wonderfully written piece, dear! Well done!

Author's Response: You're spoiling me with all these wonderful review Jayde! Literally my face is hurting from all the smiling. I like to think this is what things would have been like for the satff at Hgowarts before the War kicked back into gear and before Harry came along getting into trouble and causing problems at every turn. I'm pleased you found it bittersweet - just like a lemon drop - a little sour and bitter, but sweet enough you want to go back for more. =)

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Review #4, by Ydnas Odell Lemon Drop

22nd August 2015:
Awesome! You deserve an ambrosia every flavour bean for this! How in the world did you come up with this idea? It is so much fun.

The characters are on-point, although Dumbledore is more cruel with his practical jokes than I've imagined. The writing style is simple but lightly elegant as well. There are a few grammar mistakes and dropped words, as always with fanfics though (but far less than most). I rate this a nine although sadly I don't think it will be read much because of the unique topic and rarely searched for characters. Which is ok, as we must write for ourselves first. I found this by reading the recently posted pics list, which makes me happy because usually only terrible dribble is found there. In sum, this is a nicely done fiction which I've favorites for merit!

Author's Response: Hey,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. This was written as a gift for Rose, one of the validators, as a baby shower present. She likes fics where Dumbledore and McGonagall are friends, so this was what I came up with. I'm pleased you enjoyed it and hopefully some other folks will also search it out and read it too.


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