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Review #1, by alicia and anne We Are Forever

10th September 2015:
Yes! A Louis story! I am so excited, I love your Louis so much! :D

I'm so glad that James is there to help him get through this.

Louis is so adorable! And he is so much like Harry in his worry about dancing in front of everyone haha, I love that you have that comparission.

And you have described the decoartions so beautifully, it's so easy to imagine myself there surrounded by that beauty. *in love*

AHHH THEY'RE KISSING AND IT'S SO ADORABLE!! :D I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! OMG OMG OMG OMG! I AM CRYING! AND THIS ISN'T GOOD BECAUSE I'VE ONLY JUST PUT MAKE UP ON AND OH MY GOD HE'S PROPOSED AND OH MY GOD!

SERIOUSLY I CAN'T STOP CRYING AND SMILING AND AHHH! JUST . AHHH!! I HAVE NO WORDS FOR MY FEELINGS RIGHT NOW, MY WORDS HAVE FAILED ME AND I'M JUST THIS BIG MESS OF EMOTIONS!

THE RING IS MADE OF FIRE. THE. RING. IS. MADE. OF. FIRE! YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH THIS ADORABLENESS I AM DEAD!

SERIOUSLY. I AM DEAD.

LOVE THIS!

Author's Response: Thanks Tammi! You are so sweet!
Let me just say I love your use of caps.
I loved writing this, since I usually don't write a lot of super fluff. And I love Louis. He's great.
Please don't die. I need more stories from you. :)
Glad you liked it Tammi!


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Review #2, by MrsJaydeMalfoy We Are Forever

27th August 2015:
I LOVE THIS! I haven't read any of your Louis/Garret before, but I really, really loev this!

I love the fact that you've created another Triwizard tournament, this time at Beauxbatons, and that Louis Weasley is the Hogwarts champion! I really think Louis doesn't get enough love in fic, so this was just brilliant!

The two of them seem so perfect togeether, they're both the missing link that the other needs! The kiss was magical, and the proposal was SO SWEET! Gah! The feels!

I also really loved the campfire discussion, and how they somehow managed to create their rings together! That was amazing, and your description was so vivid!

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks Jayde! Since I've been neglecting the main story, (which is actually getting re-done at this very moment, I'm just responding to reviews to procrastinate! oops) I had to write this one to make me feel better.
I loved writing the ring scene. It was so fun to make!
Thanks for the review Jayde!

- Kyle


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Review #3, by Frankie05 We Are Forever

24th August 2015:
Kyle,

this was insanely sweet. I mean my fluffy heart is pattering away so fast right now.

I love the set up. Its another Triwizard tournament and a Wotter is represent Hogwarts! And his mother was also the Triwizard champion from the school the tournament is now taking place at. Nicely done!

I would be nervous too, dancing in front of a large crowd, give me adrenaline every time compared to a performance, but I love the pep talk James gives him. It's like they are best buddies and he needs a pep talk before facing something so humiliating and he's the only one who can do it! I love it :)

And then in comes the love interest. They almost always set the world right when one is nervous. I know my spouse does that for me when I get nervous before something. I think you really hit the nail on the head.

I loved the banter on the balcony and the banter on the beach. YOu took what could have been an extremely cheesey sappy moment and added some life into it. You made it so realistic that it wasn't over the top and there is definitely cheese in real life.

The magic, I didn't understand (but I am a muggle) but from the sound of it, it was very powerful magic, that bonds them for life.

I think it's so nice of you to just write this on a whim for your friend :) It was very nice to read.

Frankie

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