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Reading Reviews for Check Yes, Lily Evans
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by May Check Yes, Lily Evans

22nd August 2015:
I love this story James always knew he liked lily he never wavered

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Review #2, by Frankie05 Check Yes, Lily Evans

20th August 2015:
This. Is. Perfect. It's so sweet. So fluffy. So interesting. I like that this note passing thing has been going on for years. I like the development of the characters and the notes. They astart out young as as the story progresses they grow up and they are more in tune with each other. The notes start out as a crumpled ball and for years she gets notes and then they start to form more beautiful images- lions, birds, etc. and the pinnacle of the story- they are olde, and James' very boldly hands her the note and a quill and it's a Lily. Lots the perfect summation of his pursual. You've done a magnificent job describing the story and getting me excited in a small amount of space :) plus James and Lily are incredibly adorable.

I like how Lily knew what was in the notes, yet she kept taking them. It seemed like such a small act to show her feelings had grown into something more.

If you are on the forums, I'd encourage you to enter this into the short and sweet challenge. It's very good :)

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