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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Kristina Out With the Old, In With the New

17th April 2017:
I feel like this story was a bit rushed. Basically the whole story happened within a day but I feel like you could have put more into it so it made more sense. I love the story line. So maybe come back and rewrite this. Draw it out just a little bit more. The fact that Draco and Hermione are just meeting again after such a long time and by the end of the story they are already making out just seems unrealistic knowing the past these two have. Plus there were many grammatical errors that need corrected. This is all constructive criticism so please don't take any of this too harshly. This story could be really great. Just put a bit more effort into it:)

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive criticism, it really is appreciated. I'll keep it mind if/when I go back to edit.

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Review #2, by DaFossil Out With the Old, In With the New

6th April 2017:
Good story, but almost screams for a sequel.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm considering doing one, it just might take a little time.

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Review #3, by MeeshsWand Out With the Old, In With the New

7th August 2015:
I liked it. I usually read stories with a longer outcome, but this was well written. I almost want more, but it's enough on its own too.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was thinking of making a long Dramione story, I might just expand on this, but I'm not sure just yet. Thanks for your comment.

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