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Reading Reviews for The Art of Forgetting
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Frankie05 Chapter One

21st August 2015:
Oh my heavens this story took me on a roller coaster of emotions. Well done.

You set it up so nicely- describing Severus in this story and making sure thAt we understand him. I was curious at the beginning if it was Halloween but then you confirmed it ;). Severus is so snarky I love it!

When he left the great hall, he didn't grab his bag or maybe I speed read and missed that detail(happens to me all the time) but it was so interesting that he apparated to Privet Drive. I was so curious what he might be doing there.

Harry, of course, can see him because he's magical and Snape is magical and this story is magical. I love the innocent 6 year old Harry. It made my heart swell with happiness. I didn't understand why Snape was getting so furious with now Harry was treated. But then he says "your father loves you very much." Loves. Not loved. As in present tense and I was like holy crap. This is real.

And you confirmed my suspicions!! The change was a bit weird at first. I was lost/confused but I started trekking. I liked that the eyes stayed the same, but there were some markets of Severus and it made me want to scream!!

How sad that Severus couldn't properly love his kid. How crazy is this idea! I've never thought that before and I think you executed it perfectly. It's a different though that Harry is glamoured from an early age. Goodness this was well thought out.

Great job

Frankie

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your amazing and considerate review, I greatly appreciate you taking the time to write it and apologize for not being able to respond sooner (lost my account information). I wanted to let you know that there is a sequel to this story I wrote about a year ago. If you are interested in can be found on fanfiction net, under my name Scorpia710, the title is 'The Art of Forgiving' so you can imagine what it's about. Thank you again!

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Review #2, by Megan Chapter One

11th August 2015:
that is an amazing story... Loved it a lot!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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Review #3, by poobear Chapter One

20th July 2015:
Hi There
Wow such a sad but great story would you please do a follow on or make it into a story please ? it was i think that good.
Bruce x

Author's Response: A sequel has been written and I will be posting it soon, thank you for reading! :)

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