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Review #1, by Felpata Lupin Chapter One

9th August 2015:
Hello!
Welcome to HPFF!
I noticed you hadn't received any reviews yet, so I thought I'd stop by...

This was a cute first chapter for a Marauder story. A bit cliched, maybe, but all in all good. :)

Charlotte seems an interesting character. She is a part of the Pureblood society but not really involved in their ideology. She surely has an interesting family... I wonder what her parents' reactions will be, and her brother, too. He didn't seem thrilled.

I liked the first people she met were Remus and Marlene, because they are both so friendly and kind! I suppose Charlotte, Marlene and Lily will become great friends! :)

I'm curious to know where you're planning to go with this. I enjoyed reading what you have so far! :)

Love,
Chiara

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